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Lyrics will check it please or your opinion

Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2012 10:06 pm
by Appie
this lyrics is writin from the heart but i want to hae your oponion what do you think ?


you nuh Right
yes you are The snake in this time
Wicked man
yes you are the snake in this time

and when the snake bite and poison I
something sharp is upon i throat
But Jah Jah Know
whatever the snake try's
i will never leave Jah Alone

what a brutality
to say Rasta far I has no spirituality
Rasta far i is nuh future for mankind
wicked man a say
but you nuh right
cause Jah Guide I And I
but you nuh right
Jah Guide I trough Life

mark I man word I say
there's gonna be Jah fire,
Cause Jah Say
Everyman gonna get his pay
according to the work he has done

Repeat from the top 1x

Thanks Please Give me a true awnser

Re: Lyrics will check it please or your opinion

Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2012 3:44 pm
by unorthodoxconqueror
nice man. does it have music? are you a singer?

Re: Lyrics will check it please or your opinion

Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2012 3:50 pm
by Appie
I will voice the riddim track next week:):D

Re: Lyrics will check it please or your opinion

Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 12:23 pm
by Appie
http://soundcloud.com/jouke-yspeerd-1

The Song is recorded this is a raw version