Lyrics will check it please or your opinion

[Appie]

this lyrics is writin from the heart but i want to hae your oponion what do you think ?


you nuh Right
yes you are The snake in this time
Wicked man
yes you are the snake in this time

and when the snake bite and poison I
something sharp is upon i throat
But Jah Jah Know
whatever the snake try's
i will never leave Jah Alone

what a brutality
to say Rasta far I has no spirituality
Rasta far i is nuh future for mankind
wicked man a say
but you nuh right
cause Jah Guide I And I
but you nuh right
Jah Guide I trough Life

mark I man word I say
there's gonna be Jah fire,
Cause Jah Say
Everyman gonna get his pay
according to the work he has done

Repeat from the top 1x

Thanks Please Give me a true awnser

[unorthodoxconqueror]

nice man. does it have music? are you a singer?

[Appie]

I will voice the riddim track next week:):D

[Appie]

http://soundcloud.com/jouke-yspeerd-1

The Song is recorded this is a raw version