I really need a critic n honest word

[rob-Itheselector]

I am a very big reggae collector and appreciate your willingness to criticism.

You music is honest and full of positive vibe. The style is not so much traditional reggae but feel you are influenced by possibly some reggae artist(Alpha Blondy). I don't believe you need vocal training and profession studio musicians or recordings. If you play from the heart and willing to listen and learn from others you will start to create music that will bring joy to others and yourself

If you want to make it more ROOTS-reggae check out Augustus Pablo, King tubby.... These 2 have produced and made works many singers and have created a strong and format of reggae roots sounds. There are many other producers and artist that i find to be never ending sometimes but King Tubby and Augustus Pablo will lead you to a great reggae sound and knowledge....


I would like to see you sing songs similar to these tracks. Let me know what you think... You should be able to find all these albums or songs online(Not to Rare)




Hugh Mundell- My Mind- (Augustus Pablo Production)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uIZCfTv0bhc

Alpha Blondy- Jerusalem

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LlOcZELIn5M

Pablo Gad

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Np-8dq6H ... re=related

King Tubby- Flag Dub

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZvYSYOKF ... re=related




ROOTS

ROB-i

[giant panda]

great work! i agree that live instrumentation would help a lot. on first listen i thought your voice needed more oomph, but it sounds very nice listening to it a second time.

[lawrence_mwangi]

@I-Lion @giant panda @mg1 @Klaus5 and @rob-Itheselector
thanks alot i will consider a female background also i will do the beefing of the base and do some live guitar, i have shared with my producer this comments.
I would like to thank you so much, i totally appreciate you honest opinion, its made me happy and i knw i will do great work! Jah Bless and nuff Respec!

@rob-Itheselector thanks man, i will check those albums you have recommended, am so humbled, you have really increased my confidence thanks again Jah bless!
once i do the songs next year i will put submit made them available for listening to yah guyz

the first song in did i tried to make it more roots lol!
its audio.

u can listen at
http://Christianmissiontrips.org/download/wait.mp3