Demo will you listen please?

[Appie21]

Hellow everybody i would ask you a favor and listen to my demo and tell me what you think?

every comment is welcome

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zBSvtqhL ... tube_gdata


Thank You

[johnpublic]

that sounds awful..is it you?? damn never heard something that sounds evil like that...please stop making music...try another profession.....maybe as a butcher

[Appie21]

ok thanks for you commend::P

[Appie21]

and remember its just a demo:P and you are not verry nice to me:P

[johnpublic]

sorry but I didnt want to hurt your feelings...but the truth must be told man..sorry if i was a bit ruff

[Appie21]

ok np

[Siegi]

Not that bad I have 70'reggae that is worse. And you definitely got the reggae feeling. Just sing a little bit more contra the melody.

[pf]

well, I heard lots of music that sounds much more evil than that!!
I think it's ok, vocals are not out of this world and effects can be improved a lot but it's ok. I don't see the link with Gladdys keys however...
If you like it and are proud of it that's the most important...and anyway, don't stop making music!!! Keep on.

[Appie21]

thanks PF, my intention with this track is to record it instrumental in may. This demo is created with FL Studio and very crappy desktop "skype" mic... I don't want to make a mistake with the recording, so any tips would be nice . Studio time = *%&)*(&^)(*% expensive

[Dubbaddikt]

I dont think it sounds awfull or evil, maybe johnpublic was trippin. Its basic and could do with bass and heavier sound.Reminds me a little of Martin Campbell's stuff.